A Gift that says "I'm Proud Of You"
A great way to say "I'm proud of you", A Gift of Poetry can be used as an effective communicator of every emotion. This can be especially powerful when communicating with your loved ones, including your offspring.
Who do you want the poem written for?: My Son
Why do you want the poem written ?: He joined the marines and was sent to Parris Island for boot camp. He was sent before his actual departure date.
Key Messages: How very proud we are of him for even considering the military with the world in the shape it is. He had to leave early with only seven hours notice. He didn't get to see everyone he wanted to say bye to before he left.
Memorable Moments: We had planned a big party that he didn't get to attend. There were a lot of tears that night. Not only because we missed him but because he would be infantry and in great danger at war. He strives to be the best in anything he does. In five weeks in hell, (boot camp) he had accomplished squad leader and was told he would graduate with honors in dress blues. Little did he know he would get sick and be sent home on a medical discharge. He was so disappointed and felt like he failed and let everyone down. He has never disappointed us in anything. We are still waiting on him to be released. He has a two year daughter who asks about him everyday. She doesn't understand why we can't go get her daddy and cries for him. I my self have shed tears every day. We want him to know that he has not failed us and that we are very proud of him and he will always be our hero. From Mom, Dad, James, Shannon, and Amaiya
Package Type: Deluxe
Thank you so much! The poem looks great. There is only one little thing I see that I would like to change. Could you just change the word soldier to marine? I think it has it in there twice, but other than that everything looks great.
I have no problem at all with you putting it on your website. You do not have to change any names or details.
For the paper, I would just like the plain-no background. Yes I would like it to be autographed and the handwritten draft as well. Also, at the end of the poem could you put.... Love Mom, Dad, James, Shannon and Amaiya.
Again, Thanks so much! It is Wonderful!!